6.5: Contested Usage Answers

I hope to finish my science project tomorrow.I hope to tomorrow completely finish my science project.No revision is necessary.

The usher asked us to carefully proceed to the exit.Carefully the usher asked us to proceed to the exit. No revision is necessary.

If you walk across the bridge, you will see two windmills.

Read each sentence and determine which revision, if any, makes the sentence stronger and clearer.

The usher asked us to carefully proceed to the exit.Carefully the usher asked us to proceed to the exit. ✔ No revision is necessary.

X She encouraged the dancers to energetically and gracefully perform the routine, also confidently.✔ She encouraged the dancers to perform the routine energetically, gracefully, and confidently.No revision is necessary.