Question 5 • (OC27) ENG 4-1001400-S2-VRobinson-VOL7006P
Read the introduction to a personal statement.(1) Usually, when people talk about "rocky” relationships, it’s with a frown, but mine has enriched my life. (2) I became fascinated with rocks when I was really young, and throughout my childhood you could usually find me with my pockets bulging from whatever stony treasures I’d scavenged that day. (3) When my science teacher taught us a unit on geology, I realized that my fascination could become an exciting career that could also help me make good money. (4) Obtaining an internship to work on the geological exhibit at the museum is an important step on my road to being a geologist.
Answer
A
Sentence 1 should include the writer’s first name.
B
Sentence 2 should state what the essay prompt was.
C
Sentence 3 should avoid mentioning money.
D
Sentence 4 should avoid the extreme opinion.
Explanation
Sentence 3 says the writer’s fascination could lead to a career that would “help me make good money.” In a personal statement, the writer should focus on interest in geology and the work’s value rather than presenting income as a reason for choosing the career. Sentence 4 explains how the internship supports the writer’s goal; it does not express an extreme opinion.
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