Applying Recursive Writing for Organization and Tone
Question 5 • {MDVA} English IV Sem. 1 - CR
Read the excerpt from Inez's essay.The bus was almost empty when I got on. None of the other passengers were talking. The quiet made it easy to concentrate on my book. But more people boarded the bus. The bus picked people up at every stop along the route. Slowly, the noise grew. Before long, it was too noisy to read.
Answer
A
The bus was almost empty when I got on, but more people boarded the bus. The bus picked up people at every stop. Before long, it was too noisy to read.
B
The bus was almost empty when I got on, and the quiet made it easy to concentrate on my book. Unfortunately, the bus picked people up at every stop along the route, and before long, it was too noisy to read.
C
The bus was almost empty when I got on, and none of the other passengers were talking. But more people boarded the bus at every stop along the route. Slowly, the noise grew. Before long, it was too noisy to read.
D
The bus was almost empty when I got on, and the quiet made it easy to concentrate on my book. But more people boarded the bus. Slowly, the noise grew.