Applying Recursive Writing for Organization and Tone
Question 1 • {MDVA} English IV Sem. 1 - CR
Read the excerpt from Lori's essay.Daylight streamed over the mountains, waking me earlier than I wanted it to, since we had hiked for six hours the day before. I buried my head in my sleeping bag, hoping to catch more sleep, but my brothers had been awakened as well, and they were already talking about what to have for breakfast.
Answer
A
Daylight streamed over the mountains, waking me. It was earlier than I wanted. We had hiked for six hours the day before. I buried my head in my sleeping bag, hoping to catch more sleep. My brothers had been awakened as well. They were already talking about what to have for breakfast.
B
Daylight streamed over the mountains, waking me earlier than I wanted it to. Since we'd hiked for six hours the day before, I buried my head in my sleeping bag. I was hoping to catch more sleep, but my brothers had been awakened as well. They were already talking about what to have for breakfast.
C
Daylight streamed over the mountains. It woke me earlier than I wanted it to, since we had hiked for six hours the day before. I buried my head in my sleeping bag, hoping to catch more sleep. Unfortunately, my brothers had been awakened as well, and they were already talking about what to have for breakfast.
D
Daylight streamed over the mountains, waking me earlier than I wanted it to. We had hiked for six hours the day before. I buried my head in my sleeping bag, hoping to catch more sleep, but my brothers had been awakened as well, and they were already talking about what to have for breakfast.