Compound and Complex Sentences

Question 1

Which revision corrects the punctuation errors in this complex sentence with two dependent clauses?We picked these apples, when we went upstate which was on Tuesday.

Revolt · Accepted Answer

Remove the comma after “apples” and put a comma after “upstate.”

Question 2

How could you correctly combine the first three sentences of the passage below to add variety? Check all that apply.I saw Amir. I was visiting New York. He lives there. We went to an Italian restaurant and ate big plates of spaghetti. It was a fun outing.

Revolt · Accepted Answer

I saw Amir, who lives in New York, when I was visiting.; When I was visiting New York, I saw Amir, who lives there.; I saw Amir when I was visiting New York, which is where he lives.

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