The best way to revise sentence 1 is to add and after the comma✔ add but after the commadelete the comma.
Answer
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add but after the comma
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add a semicolon after read

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The best way to revise sentence 1 is to add and after the comma✔ add but after the commadelete the comma.

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✔ add but after the comma; .: add but after the comma; .: add a semicolon after read

Language: Sentence Fluency