Read each sentence and determine which revision, if any, makes the sentence stronger and clearer.

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Please plan to next week return.:

Revise it to eliminate the split infinitive.

Tiana always aims to completely, efficiently, and without error finish her homework.:

Revise it to eliminate the split infinitive.

You must force yourself to really think before making a final decision.:

No revision is necessary.

I advised them to at least explore some new options.:

No revision is necessary.

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