Driving Sid to the airport, the weather was cold and rainy.Driving to the airport, Sid was cold and rainy.The weather was cold and rainy when I drove Sid to the airport.The weather was cold and rainy driving to the airport.The sentence is correct as written.
Looking up from the book, the fire alarm caught my attention.Looking up from the book, my attention was caught by the fire alarm.The fire alarm caught my attention, looking up from the book.The fire alarm caught my attention, so I looked up from my book.The sentence is correct as written.
Which revision makes it more clear that Erin speaks to her husband on Tuesday?
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