Correct Modifiers and Concise Wording

Question 1

What is the best revision of sentence 4?

Revolt · Accepted Answer

A: I began my presentation by showing how a solar cell and a wire could use the sun’s rays to make a fan spin.

Question 2

Which is the best revision of sentence 1?

Revolt · Accepted Answer

B: It amazes me that a week ago I was worried that my camp presentation would be a flop.

Question 3

What kinds of errors does this paragraph contain? Check all of the boxes that apply.

Revolt · Accepted Answer

B: Dangling modifiers; C: Misplaced modifiers; D: Redundancies; F: Troublesome modifiers; G: Wordiness

Question 4

Identify the types of errors you corrected.

Revolt · Accepted Answer

A: Dangling modifiers; B: Wordiness; C: Misplaced modifiers; D: Redundant words or phrases; E: Troublesome modifiers

Question 5

Review the model paragraph. How many of the same revisions did you make?I made all of the same revisions.I made most of the same revisions.I made some of the same revisions.I made none of the same revisions.

Revolt · Accepted Answer

A: I made all of the same revisions.

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