Read the excerpt from Ellie's graduation speech.It is a privilege to celebrate our graduation with all of you. This day has been a long time coming, a testament to our hard work and perseverance. As we prepare to pursue our next goal in life, let us take a moment to reflect on the people who have supported us on this journey. We owe a debt of gratitude to our teachers, who challenged us to think critically, to our families, who cheered us on every step of the way, and to our friends, who were there to lift us up when we stumbled. I am honored to have shared this journey with such an exceptional group of individuals, and I am excited to see the impact we will have on the world.Which revision best improves the sentence variety?
Answer
A
As we prepare to pursue our next goal in life, let us take a moment to reflect on the people who have supported us on this journey. Teachers: you challenged us to think critically. Families: you cheered us on. Friends: you lifted us up when we stumbled.
B
As we prepare to pursue our next goal in life, let us take a moment to reflect on the people who have supported us on this journey, including our teachers, families and friends. We were challenged to think critically, cheered as we took each step, and lifted up when we stumbled.
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I am honored to have shared this journey with such an exceptional group of individuals, and excited to see the impact we will have on the world.
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I am honored and excited to see the impact such an exceptional group of individuals will have on the world.