Writing a Narrative about Overcoming a Challenge

Question 1

Which sentences use description that holds the reader’s interest? Check all that apply.I walked down the hallway to my teacher’s classroom. The bacon danced in the pan like a fish in a bucket.The robust, smoky aroma of the coffee filled the kitchen.The kids were excited as they played outside in the backyard The waiting room was cold and sterile, and smelled of antiseptic.

Revolt · Accepted Answer

The bacon danced in the pan like a fish in a bucket.; The robust, smoky aroma of the coffee filled the kitchen.; The waiting room was cold and sterile, and smelled of antiseptic.

Question 2

Use the drop-down menus to choose the most descriptive and effective version of each sentence. | I walked home in the rain. | Shawna was mad at me. | Charles was embarrassed.

Revolt · Accepted Answer

Shawna’s hostility toward me was revealed by her cold stare and crossed arms.

Question 3

Use the drop-down menus to choose the most descriptive and effective version of each sentence. | I walked home in the rain. | Shawna was mad at me. | Charles was embarrassed.

Revolt · Accepted Answer

Charles felt his ears and cheeks grow red as he scrambled to pick his lunch up off the floor.

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