Planning and Writing an Effective Argumentative Essay
Question 3 • [ELA10] ELA 10, Sem 2 (26-27)
Read Riley's paragraph.(1) E-books, while reducing the need for paper and transportation, involve the environmental costs of manufacturing e-readers. (2) Including mining for rare earth metals and energy use. (3) Over time, frequent use of an e-reader can offset its environmental footprint, but for casual readers, the production and disposal of e-reader devices may negate these benefits.Which revision corrects an error?
Answer
A
changing "manufacturing" to "manufacture" in sentence 1
B
combining sentences 1 and 2 with a comma after "e-readers"