Planning and Writing an Effective Informational Essay
Question 2 • [ELA10] ELA 10, Sem 2 (26-27)
Read a sentence from Lucia's essay.Sibling dynamics in competitive environments can significantly impact personal growth and self-perception, as illustrated by Andrés and Daniel's experiences in basketball.Which revision makes Lucia's sentence more precise?
Answer
A
"Sibling dynamics in certain environments…"
B
"…can impact personal growth and self-perception…"
C
"…as illustrated by Andrés and Daniel's contrasting experiences…"