Planning and Writing an Effective Informational Essay
Question 7 • ELA 10B - 2023
Read Maya's thesis statement.Success is best done with hard work, leading you to grow emotionally and get a sense of achievement.Which revision best improves her statement's effectiveness?
Answer
A
Success is most fulfilling when achieved by hard work, as it builds character, instills a sense of accomplishment, and provides lasting satisfaction.
B
When a person grows emotionally and can feel a sense of achievement in something they worked on, then they will feel the hard work was worth it.
C
Success leads to emotional growth when you succeed in completing hard work.
D
Hard work leads to the most fulfilling success a person can feel.