Read the conclusion to a personal statement.(1) I’ve had some growth experiences. (2) They’ve helped me to improve my math skills. (3) Moreover, I have learned to apply these skills to designing and constructing movie sets. (4) I’m looking forward to honing my skills by working as a production assistant on a film this summer.
Answer
A
revise sentence 1 to restate a specific topic.
B
add details about a future goal to sentence 2.
C
delete sentence 3 because it is repetitive.
D
specify the name of the film in sentence 4.
Explanation
Sentence 1, “I’ve had some growth experiences,” is vague and does not remind readers what the personal statement was about. Revising it to restate a specific topic would make the conclusion clearer and better connect it to the experiences described. Sentence 3 adds a distinct point about applying math skills to set design, so it is not repetitive.
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