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Research Workshop: Writing and Presenting the Argumentative Essay, Part 1

Question 5 • *CR Expository Reading and Writing S2 [E4260OX]

Read the sentence that appears in an argumentative essay about American public education. Millions of dollars have been spent by taxpayers on programs to improve education.Which revision offers the most improvement in sentence fluency?

Answer
A
Programs to improve education cost millions of dollars, and taxpayers need to pay for them.
B
Taxpayers have spent millions of dollars on programs to improve education.
C
So much money has been spent on education by way of taxes.
D
Programs endorsed by taxpayers have also been funded by taxpayers.

Explanation

The original sentence uses passive voice: “Millions of dollars have been spent by taxpayers.” Choice B puts the subject, “Taxpayers,” first and uses the direct verb “have spent,” making the sentence clearer and more fluent while preserving its meaning. Choice A adds the unsupported idea that taxpayers still need to pay.

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