Read the excerpt from Weston's essay.On my last day, I went alone to the beach. The sea breeze was warm. It carried heat from the south. The sun set and its last rays rolled across the water. It was like a bright, shimmering path. I wanted to take that path. It beckoned me.
Answer
A
On my last day, I went alone to the beach. The sea breeze was warm from the south. The sunset rolled across the water like a bright, shimmering path, beckoning me.
B
On my last day, I went alone to the beach. The sea breeze and the sun rays rolled across the water. It was like a bright, shimmering path I wanted to take.
C
On my last day, I went alone to the beach, where the sea breeze was warm. It carried heat from the south, while the sun set. I wanted to take a bright, shimmering path.
D
On my last day, I went alone to the beach. The sea breeze carried heat from the south. The sun set. Its last rays rolled like a bright, shimmering path that beckoned me.