Read the beginning of Denise’s personal narrative.1. Mr. Thompson loves teaching science. 2. Every single day, he becomes very excited about what he is talking about. 3. He waves his hands around, and asks, “Isn’t this amazing?” 4. All of his students love his enthusiasm.
Answer
A
Denise needs to add a strong example of Mr Thompson’s enthusiasm.
B
Denise needs to add a strong example of Mr Thompson’s enthusiasm.
C
Denise needs to include herself as a character in the narrative.
D
Denise needs to include herself as a character in the narrative.
E
Denise needs to add a time relationship between sentences 3 and 4.
F
Denise needs to add a time relationship between sentences 3 and 4.
G
Denise needs to change the pronoun “he” to the pronoun “we.”
H
Denise needs to change the pronoun “he” to the pronoun “we.”