The question of whether or not to allow cell phones in school is an important one. Cell phones are a monumental distraction to young people whose attention should be focused on learning. However, they do serve a purpose in that phones allow students to communicate with their parents. Plus, cell phones are great for taking pictures with friends. In all, cell phone use at school must be carefully regulated.
Answer
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It does not maintain a single point of view.
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It does not maintain appropriate verb tense.
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It does not maintain the same tone throughout.
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It does not maintain the same style throughout.
Explanation
The paragraph begins in a serious, formal tone, describing phones as a “monumental distraction” and discussing their educational impact. The phrase “Plus, cell phones are great for taking pictures with friends” sounds more casual, so the tone does not stay consistent. The paragraph can still present both sides of the issue without losing its point of view.
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