Using Resources and Reference Materials for Editing

Question 1

Which sentence type is used the most in this student’s passage?✔ compoundcomplexcompound-complex

Revolt · Accepted Answer

✔ compound

Question 2

What effect will repeating the same sentence structure most likely have on readers?It will confuse them.✔ It will bore them.It will engage them.

Revolt · Accepted Answer

✔ It will bore them.

Question 3

Which of the following revisions did you include while rewriting the passage? Check any of the boxes that apply.

Revolt · Accepted Answer

I removed the dangling preposition.; I removed the gendered pronoun.; I made the listed items parallel.; I added the Oxford comma.; I added sentence variety.; I changed the passive voice to active voice.

Question 4

Compare your revisions to the model paragraph by completing the following sentence.I made allmanysomenone of the same revisions.

Revolt · Accepted Answer

all

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