Writing a Narrative about Overcoming a Challenge Answers

Which sentences use description that holds the reader’s interest? Check all that apply.I walked down the hallway to my teacher’s classroom. The bacon danced in the pan like a fish in a bucket.The robust, smoky aroma of the coffee filled the kitchen.The kids were excited as they played outside in the backyard The waiting room was cold and sterile, and smelled of antiseptic.

Use the drop-down menus to choose the most descriptive and effective version of each sentence.

Use the drop-down menus to choose the most descriptive and effective version of each sentence.

Shawna gave me a mean look, and I could tell she was angry at me.✔ Shawna’s hostility toward me was revealed by her cold stare and crossed arms.Shawna was so mad at me that she would not talk to me the rest of the day.

Charles was humiliated after tripping in the big cafeteria.✔ Charles felt his ears and cheeks grow red as he scrambled to pick his lunch up off the floor.X Charles was very embarrassed and hoped that nobody had seen him fall.