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AssignmentMultiple Choice

Writing a Research-Based Argumentative Essay about Technology

Question 6 • S1S: English 9B (E2112 - AG)

Which sentence from this peer review provides the most effective feedback?

Answer
A
“There are also a few misspelled words and grammar errors.”
B
“Your thesis sentence is very long and could be divided into two sentences or reworded to be more concise.”
C
“You have good ideas, and your organization is clear.”
D
“You should consider revising some parts of the essay.”

Explanation

The most effective feedback identifies a specific issue and suggests a practical way to improve it. Choice B points out that the thesis sentence is too long and recommends dividing or rewording it. The other choices are either vague, mostly positive, or do not explain how to make a revision.

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