Each of these sentences is written with a nonobjective tone. Choose the corrected, objective version of each sentence.

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My great idea for getting lazy people to start recycling is to place recycling bins in key places around the city.:

Placing recycle bins in key places around the city will encourage people to recycle.

You’ll have to convince the stubborn director to keep the library open an extra hour each day.:

The library’s director may not be easily convinced to extend library hours.

Writing an E-mail about an Important Issue