Writing Coherent Sentences Answers

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Decide what revision should be made in each sentence to correct the pronoun errors.

Answers:
Sentence 1::Change “you” to “they.”
Sentence 2::Change “me” to “I.”
Sentence 3::Change “he” to “they”
Sentence 4::Change “it” to “a test.”
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✔ Change “me” to “I.”Change “I” to “they.”Change “we” to “you.”

A
✔ Change “me” to “I.”
B
Change “I” to “they.”
C
Change “we” to “you.”
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Change “I” to “me.”✔ Change “he” to “they”Change “someone” to “you.”

A
Change “I” to “me.”
B
✔ Change “he” to “they”
C
Change “someone” to “you.”
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Change “my” to “ours.”✔ Change “it” to “a test.”Change “you” to “your.”

A
Change “my” to “ours.”
B
✔ Change “it” to “a test.”
C
Change “you” to “your.”
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Which sentence contains a dangling modifier?

A
Arriving late for the movie, Jack quietly took a seat.
B
Arriving early to class, Leslie had time to finish her homework.
C
Without hearing the instructions, I found that the assignment was difficult to complete.
D
After reading the whole book, the ending was unsatisfying.
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Which sentence corrects the dangling modifier in the sample sentence?After reading the whole book, the ending was unsatisfying.

A
Reading the whole book, the ending was unsatisfying.
B
After reading the whole book, I found that the ending was unsatisfying.
C
After reading the whole book, the ending became unsatisfying.
D
Reading the whole book, the ending was unsatisfying.
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Which phrase completes the final sentence and uses a parallel structure?

A
no food with strong odors
B
don’t carry food with strong odors
C
food with strong odors behind
D
other important safety rules about food
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Which phrases are parallel in the sample sentence? Check all that apply.

A
“write a formal essay”
B
“the steps of the writing process”
C
“prewriting to gather your ideas”
D
“drafting to organize your ideas”
E
“making revisions to make sure your ideas are logical”
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Decide if the underlined part of each sentence is an absolute phrase, an appositive phrase, a restrictive clause, or a nonrestrictive clause.

Answers:
The concert that I attended was held last August.:restrictive clause
The audience moved as one, the crowd swaying to the music.:absolute phrase
The concert, which had been rescheduled, was sold out.:nonrestrictive clause
The band, a hometown favorite, came back for several encores.:appositive phrase
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✔ absolute phraseappositive phrasenonrestrictive clauserestrictive clause

A
✔ absolute phrase
B
appositive phrase
C
nonrestrictive clause
D
restrictive clause
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absolute phraseappositive phrase✔ nonrestrictive clauserestrictive clause

A
absolute phrase
B
appositive phrase
C
✔ nonrestrictive clause
D
restrictive clause
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absolute phrase✔ appositive phrasenonrestrictive clauserestrictive clause

A
absolute phrase
B
✔ appositive phrase
C
nonrestrictive clause
D
restrictive clause
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Based on the word choice in sentence 1, who is the most likely audience for this passage?

A
an informed audience
B
a general audience
C
an uninformed audience
D
a young audience
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Which revision combines sentences 2 and 3 to add sentence variety?

A
King uses two techniques at the same time. The techniques emphasize important ideas.
B
King uses the techniques at the same time, an emphasis of ideas.
C
King uses both techniques at the same time so that he can emphasize important ideas.
D
King emphasizes important ideas. He uses the techniques at the same time.
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Which sentences combine the ideas correctly? Check all that apply.The members of the team worked well together. The team members won first place in the contest.The team’s members worked well together, and they won first place in the contest.Because the team’s members worked well together, they won first place in the contest.Being team members, the team worked well by winning first place in the contest.The team’s members won first place in the contest because they worked well together.The team’s members won first place in the contest; they worked well together.

A
The team’s members worked well together, and they won first place in the contest.
B
Because the team’s members worked well together, they won first place in the contest.
C
Being team members, the team worked well by winning first place in the contest.
D
The team’s members won first place in the contest because they worked well together.
E
The team’s members won first place in the contest; they worked well together.

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