Writing Workshop: Compare-Contrast Essay

Question 10 • 130CR English 3

Choose the example that demonstrates improved sentence flow.

Answer

The country is the best place to live. Cities are crowded and dirty. Cities don’t allow freedom in the same way the country does. The country is great because kids can run around and explore.

The best place to live is the country. Cities are crowded and dirty, and they don’t allow the same freedom the country does. In the country, running around and exploring are the best parts of childhood.

Explanation

Choice B demonstrates improved sentence flow because it combines related ideas and avoids repeating “Cities” at the start of several sentences. The ideas move smoothly from comparing city life with country life to explaining why the country is appealing. Choice A repeats its phrasing and presents the ideas in a choppier sequence.

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