Writing Workshop: Effective Professional Communication
Question 7 • IN-English Language Arts 11 B Credit Recovery
Read the excerpt from Jackson’s letter to his principal about starting a new club at his school.(1) I have talked to twelve of my fellow students who are also interested in forming a photography club. (2) Also, Ms. Gonzales told me that she might want to help out. Which is the best revision of sentence 2?
Answer
A
Also, Ms. Gonzales told some people that she wants to be part of the club.
B
Also, Ms. Gonzales let me know that she thinks this is a good idea.
C
In addition, Ms. Gonzales said that she likes taking pictures, too.
D
In addition, Ms. Gonzales has expressed interest in being our teacher advisor.