Read each sentence and determine which revision, if any, makes the sentence stronger and clearer.

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I hope to tomorrow finish my science project.:

I hope to finish my science project tomorrow.

The usher asked us to proceed carefully to the exit.:

No revision is necessary.

She encouraged the dancers to energetically, gracefully, and confidently perform the routine.:

She encouraged the dancers to perform the routine energetically, gracefully, and confidently.

6.5: Contested Usage