Which statement best explains why a writer might revise the second sentence to use passive voice rather than active voice?
The usher asked us to carefully proceed to the exit.Carefully the usher asked us to proceed to the exit. No revision is necessary.
She encouraged the dancers to energetically and gracefully perform the routine, also confidently.She encouraged the dancers to perform the routine energetically, gracefully, and confidently.No revision is necessary.
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