AnswersGA-GSE English Language Arts 11 BUsing Resources and Reference Materials for Editing

Using Resources and Reference Materials for Editing Answers

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Rewrite the student passage using the usage rules discussed in this lesson.

Answer:

It’s official: our team is playing in the championship game! For students who are interested, there are tickets available in the office. This game will have a big effect on our ranking.

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Which of the following revisions did you include while rewriting the passage? Check any of the boxes that apply.

A
I removed the dangling preposition.
B
I removed the gendered pronoun.
C
I made the listed items parallel.
D
I added the Oxford comma.
E
I added sentence variety.
F
I changed the passive voice to active voice.

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