Read the sentence. You have to agree that paving over that muddy, gross area where we wait before school is a good idea. Which revision makes the tone of the sentence appropriate for a formal e-mail?

A formal e-mail should use polite, professional wording and avoid slang or overly forceful claims. “Please review our suggestion” is courteous, and “muddy area where students wait before school” describes the problem clearly. Choice C is the most appropriate revision; the other choices use informal terms such as “awesome” and “gross,” or sound too forceful.

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